#Very nice. Her eyes are so big and lovely and such a warm smile. I really love that shine at the top of her hair. It gives the impression of very well kept hair and the soft light on the side of her face is nice too.
#I love the angle of this picture, it makes it look very cool and natural. i also like her hair i think you did it really well and the lighting is really good too in this picture i think you should do more like this.
The sketch lines are a little distracting but that's just me. Very realistic. Hope she liked it. I like that you included shine in the hair but don't be afraid to take artistic license and add more shine around the edges of her hair. Likewise the whole left side of her body can be given a highlight as well with a darker color to offset it just behind her in the background. Gettin' good buddy.